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Transcending
Day is not so much an adventure as a rite of passage for the two boys.
The central sequence where they transcend was written very much earlier
than the other parts, always intending it to go into a new series of stories
after The Doctor and Rose were married. I thought originally it might
be the first story, but I decided to have a certain amount of build up
to it, with them getting their own TARDIS and making a few more mistakes
as ‘rookies’ before getting their ‘wings’ as it
were. But essentially the sequence when they went into deep meditation,
mentored by The Doctor, and Chris experienced such excruciating pain that
The Doctor and Davie
both had to help him through it was drafted. The part where Davie pictures their conception and growth within
their mother’s womb, and then their birth was intended to mirror
what was happening to them now as a sort of rebirth. Quite a few stories
back, in Riddle of the Sands, the story in which The Doctor first teaches
the twins to do deep meditative trances, Davie describes the sensation
as ‘like being born’ and his twin and The Doctor wonder why
he said that. This sequence, in which it is clear that Davie DOES have
unconscious memories of his birth that he can call up when in a trance
explains that remark.
One
change that I made was the fact that Christopher was there to take part
in the ceremony. I toyed with him sharing the mentoring, but I actually
preferred it to be an intimate moment between The Doctor and the twins,
after he had been their teacher for so long.
The
presence of Brenda as Davie’s girlfriend
and David’s act of ‘rebellion’ in discarding Gallifreyan
ceremonial dress in favour of a Scots plaid were also late additions to
the start of the story. 
The
sequence in which Chris tells The Doctor what he wants to do with his
life was written separately and joined into this story when I came to
draft it together. I had deliberately given the impression all along that
Chris might be gay, if unconsciously, at least. But I never intended that
he would be. Those were red herrings, basically so that The Doctor would
make the same assumption before Chris explained what he really wanted
to do with himself. At that point we see his dream unfold. While Davie
wants to build his own time machines, Chris wants to explore the spiritual
side of his Time Lord heritage, with his own sanctuary where he can teach
others to share his gifts. Finally the twins are complete individuals
with different goals.

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